Alright. Adding just a few more keyframes was a great way to get better overall timing. And even if the timing is not great at all parts, I can still see that something feels odd and that I need to change it.
I have been pushing some old keyframes and making them a bit more extreme. It’s hard because some part of my brain is telling me to keep it down and simple. But I am convinced I will get greater result if I continue pushing the extremes. How ever. some parts will need to be changed completely. It’s far too many to point them all out now, but the most urgent I think is at 0:42 when the character is climbing the small hill.
Also got a great suggestion that I should try and work with the camera movements more. So I tried resting the camera at the little doghouse and I think it adds to the moment of just sneaking. Well here is the clip so far, now shortened down 10 sek.